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Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

I like the way they keep rescuing creatures, then each creature helps them in some way, thus rewarding the gift of kindness. I'm sure I've come across that motif in fairytales... lovely.

And that was such a great ending to this chapter. Poor god. I feel oddly sorry for him.

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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

Wow. I wasn't expecting an actual god of a manmade lake.

Pellig is cool. can't wait to see what happens.

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Rose Gärtnerin's avatar

The number of times this story has given me goosebumps is... well, it's a high number. XD

This may be my favorite chapter yet.

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Bridget Riley's avatar

The angels, especially Pellig and his cryptic crankiness, are so intriguing!

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Frank's avatar

Ok, you have my anxiety level at this point peaking and twisting me tighter than Dixie's hatband! With a silent lake, maybe an unsatisfied god, a miniature maybe crippled angel they have taken in and a roving band of weird humans, something has to give and I'm worried what or who it might be...

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Linda McDugle's avatar

The story keeps getting more intriguing and more layers of mystery and information revealed. 💜

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Shannon W Haynes's avatar

Savoring this story. Looking forward to more.

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Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

Great episode, Sally! Pellig is a fantastic addition to the story, a dark gray revealer of secrets.

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