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Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

I can completely sympathise with the opinion of Pellig and the angels about humans, and what happens when they gather - against their better nature of living naturally in small groups, with the immanence of the Goddess a constant presence. I also believe this is what the Goddess herself wants. What humans (ironically) call 'civilisation' has been - in her eyes - a failed experiment. In which case, the only remaining question is - what is she going to do to bring about this return?

I've been leaning towards the asteroid option. Especially in my new dystopian series.

But certainly, by inserting that bit - the angels' point of view - you have masterfully removed all the distinction between 'good guys' and 'bad guys'. Each species is simply doing what their species does.

Will there be a reconciliation? Has become the key question. Knowing you, Sally, I bet there will be - somehow...

Architectonic's avatar

I can't believe we're so close to the end. This world you've created has really got hold of me.

S.E. Reid's avatar

There are few things sweeter for a writer to hear. 🙏❤ Thank you so much for sticking with it!

Frank's avatar

S.E. you have spun this out of so many interesting threads...now what is the garment that you have woven...will it fit everyone?

Parker's avatar

Nooooooo! I’ve binged…completely transported to this alternate reality. I’d thought, because i’m so behind here that i’d have the whole thing consumed in a couple of sittings. Partly because I have an almost pathological aversion to cliff hangers and unfinished tales (probably a mix of a ND brain and cPTSD) I did that foolish thing of making an assumption! Silly Parker. Just so you know - please keep your muse near and know that there are folks out there that care, and want to know the rest of Jenny-Dog’s story. Great stuff. Of course. Life may interrupt me, but I remain a constant reader 🤩

Rhiannon D'Averc's avatar

So good - nearly there now!

Jim J Wilsky's avatar

Excellent work S.E. - Jim

Tony McNichol's avatar

Well, having read this episode and really loved it, now all that remains is for me to go back and read the first sixteen! Really interesting read. Can't wait to sink my teeth into the rest of it! Have a great rest of your weekend...

S.E. Reid's avatar

Kind of you to read it, Tony! Thanks for stopping by, and I hope you enjoy the rest! 😁