I like the way you brought the details of the photo into the ending, a suble prompt for the reader to connect the past to the present. And, of course, "Even after everything." Another subtle clue. Skillfully done, S.E. This story was a delightt to read.
Aieee! As soon as Charles is mentioned i was like oooh, here comes the twist. Did not disappoint!!
Brilliant...a little tingly but full of warmth. A perfect belated Valentine!
Much appreciated as always, Frank. 🙏
“Tingly and full of warmth” perfectly put.
I like the way you brought the details of the photo into the ending, a suble prompt for the reader to connect the past to the present. And, of course, "Even after everything." Another subtle clue. Skillfully done, S.E. This story was a delightt to read.
Thank you so much! 🙏
I particularly loved “the no-pile carpet, mapping the old man’s movements”. 👌
ooooooh I love this!! <3
WONDERFUL tale! Thank you!
Absolutely loved this!
Ah, l'amour.
Really enjoyed this. Beautifully paced.
OMG this was great!…
Really loved it, you’re a good storyteller your own self!
Thank you so much, Diana! ❤️