Sayblood's Children: Part Five
I'm really enjoying this. But maybe I should not be reading it late at night, in bed, in the dark.
Fantastic! The dialogue. The description. So good. Have I told you yet how much I love the split narration in these? Another phenomenal chapter.
You did it again.
Phenomenally good. Very much looking forward to the next chapter. The lines about the poet alone...oh man.
Ohohoh. It deepens. The dripped blood was a nice touch!
S.E., this is really really good, and oh what an addition to the lore and legend of these islands!!!
The eerie atmosphere in this one was 🔥, and that last line gave me chills!
I'm really enjoying this. But maybe I should not be reading it late at night, in bed, in the dark.
Fantastic! The dialogue. The description. So good. Have I told you yet how much I love the split narration in these? Another phenomenal chapter.
You did it again.
Phenomenally good. Very much looking forward to the next chapter. The lines about the poet alone...oh man.
Ohohoh. It deepens. The dripped blood was a nice touch!
S.E., this is really really good, and oh what an addition to the lore and legend of these islands!!!
The eerie atmosphere in this one was 🔥, and that last line gave me chills!