Wow, creepy as heck. I remember creepypastas, can’t ever forget them. I remember when my best friend phoned me one night when we were in primary school and told me a couple crazy scary stories that made me unable to sleep for a week. If I’d read this when I was ten, I’d wager it would have had the same effect.
O.O This is having the exact same effect on me as the Bloody Mary legend -- I'm NOT going to go say it three times in front of a dark mirror, but I'm THINKING about it.
What a great concept, something that could be expanded into a longer work. The audience only sees the tip of the iceberg of what's actually happening to the character, the brief postings stir the reader's imagination.
Clever. 'Show not tell' the whole way. Plus you got the Reddit vibe down to a tee and the dark AI language flip was cool. Now just iterate for full eradication. Obv. 😲
Ohhhh…I really enjoyed this. Well done! 👏 I love the last post by the OP where it sounds like generic AI-written content. Very Black Mirror-esque. Glad you decided to experiment!
Really great idea! an episode of black mirror right there! genuinely created that shudder you get when the horror is unveiled. well done. i expect you felt pretty pleased with yourself when you got that down 😎
Creepypasta-fantastic! This is great and now the cyber world has a new legend. I am def NOT going to type those words into any AI generator.
Wow, creepy as heck. I remember creepypastas, can’t ever forget them. I remember when my best friend phoned me one night when we were in primary school and told me a couple crazy scary stories that made me unable to sleep for a week. If I’d read this when I was ten, I’d wager it would have had the same effect.
Jeez. And I thought that one time I accidentally broke my laptop by trying to watch Ice Age back in college was bad. *shudder*
O.O This is having the exact same effect on me as the Bloody Mary legend -- I'm NOT going to go say it three times in front of a dark mirror, but I'm THINKING about it.
AMAZING story! Love the format too.
What a great concept, something that could be expanded into a longer work. The audience only sees the tip of the iceberg of what's actually happening to the character, the brief postings stir the reader's imagination.
I love fake social media stuff, far more than real social media to be honest. So this was a nice treat to see.
This was highkey amazing
Do you want superintelligence? This is how you get superintelligence.
That was fun.
Deep creep factor...realistic enough to think about trying it on MidJourney. You know, just to see. ;-)
This was super creepy! Loved the pace and it felt real. Keep it coming!
Clever. 'Show not tell' the whole way. Plus you got the Reddit vibe down to a tee and the dark AI language flip was cool. Now just iterate for full eradication. Obv. 😲
Ohhhh…I really enjoyed this. Well done! 👏 I love the last post by the OP where it sounds like generic AI-written content. Very Black Mirror-esque. Glad you decided to experiment!
I loved this! Esp as I am Trustee in a charity helping people losing their vision, and their remaining vision is everything. Very scary indeed 😎
Really great idea! an episode of black mirror right there! genuinely created that shudder you get when the horror is unveiled. well done. i expect you felt pretty pleased with yourself when you got that down 😎
If this is not part of a "cyber horror" genre, we need to declare it as a legit category and put this story front and center!
Thusly doth the Parasite invadeth the Collective...