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Brava! What a fun read, I looked forward to each section - and will never look at a moth the same again!

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This is the perfect ending for this story! Love it!

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Oh no! Andrea! 🫣 This was such a fantastic, chilling, open ending!

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Had to sneak off during Thanksgiving-Eve in-law evening to read this in snippets

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Imp is just fabulous! I devoured each part as soon as it appeared and the end is perfection - closure, but with so many possibilities waiting. I hope it will go on! Graft Creek is too wonderful and I wish I could join the retreat.

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Not so sure i’d want to visit…

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Good balance of providing closure leaving it open for possibilities. Nicely done.

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That was unexpected, and therefore a perfect twist...a fresh plaything for imp. And an open ended horrific future for unsuspecting but ambitious artist visitors!

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Ooh and so the wheel turns. Will Imp like being written about?

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Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!

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NOO. I can’t believe it’s over! I loved it.

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And there it is. That was fantastic. This one goes in your next collection, I hope.

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oh no you didn't!

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PS. Why moths? Any particular reason?

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Ah, good question! Candidly, I love moths. So that’s reason #1. :)

But a more “story forward” reason is that I knew I didn’t want to reveal what Imp looks like, so I needed a creature that could be its figurehead and up the ante of the tension in a tangible way. And since Imp’s entire MO seems to be that it’s drawn to creative fervor, I liked the parallel of moths being drawn to light. Not the most profound imagery, maybe, but I enjoyed playing with it!

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Splendid. Perfect ending…And i’d love to hear some of those supernatural stories about the area. As i said above, not sure i’d want to visit in person, but happy to do so from the (relative) safety of my recliner 🫣☺️

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