Short Fiction - Science Fiction
Macabre Science Fiction. This one could be an X-file.
loved this story. the premise is superb. the ending held out just long enough to keep up the uncertainty and the anticipation. good work!
Whoa!! That took a turn I was not expecting. Holy moly, this story is intense!
The first part I thought, "Hmm ... interesting concept." Part 2 has really upped the ante. Really looking forward to the rest.
Like someone ⬆️ said—Your Imagination 🤯 Loving it!
Oh, it’s really getting good now! Getting into the thick of it! What did Lannigan do? Can’t wait to find out.
That ending!! 💀✨
Killer of a premise, so to speak.😅👍
Thank you.🩶
I’m always hooked on the get go!🪝
This was a nice piece of work, then the twist became apparent and I'm going "I should have seen that coming sooner". Yowza!
Woah! This gets more and more interesting! But still...to go through all this for... retribution? Paul must have done something very, very bad.
Love it! Fantastic turn at the end
Ooh I wondered if that was it. Onward I go!
Did not see this story going there and I LOVE IT
OMG what a twist! I honestly thought he might have been in love with Paul!
You have the most fascinating imagination!!!!!!!!!!!!
Macabre Science Fiction. This one could be an X-file.
loved this story. the premise is superb. the ending held out just long enough to keep up the uncertainty and the anticipation. good work!
Whoa!! That took a turn I was not expecting. Holy moly, this story is intense!
The first part I thought, "Hmm ... interesting concept." Part 2 has really upped the ante. Really looking forward to the rest.
Like someone ⬆️ said—Your Imagination 🤯 Loving it!
Oh, it’s really getting good now! Getting into the thick of it! What did Lannigan do? Can’t wait to find out.
That ending!! 💀✨
Killer of a premise, so to speak.😅👍
Thank you.🩶
I’m always hooked on the get go!🪝
This was a nice piece of work, then the twist became apparent and I'm going "I should have seen that coming sooner". Yowza!
Woah! This gets more and more interesting! But still...to go through all this for... retribution? Paul must have done something very, very bad.
Love it! Fantastic turn at the end
Ooh I wondered if that was it. Onward I go!
Did not see this story going there and I LOVE IT
OMG what a twist! I honestly thought he might have been in love with Paul!
You have the most fascinating imagination!!!!!!!!!!!!