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Michael S. Atkinson's avatar

I would very much like to know how this ends. It reminds me (in a more positive way) of Charn in "The Magician's Nephew): a different world of which we're given glimpses but which we don't really know in full. This was fascinating and I want to know more. Who's the Swan? What's the Sleeper supposed to do?

In short, wow.

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Scoot's avatar

DANG OK. I don't know what to make of this. But this world is EXPANSIVE. By which I mean--you are not "worldbuilding", you are exploring a world you found, complete, waiting for a poet to report back to us what they observed.

I can't wait to see what Part Two holds! Don't make us wait long! We might fall asleep....

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