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Truly a perfect tale, for young and old, in this first week of a new year and this celebrated day of gifts! A delight that lifted the spirit!

And I'm thinking it would be marvelous as an audio piece, read by the author perhaps?

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"No one is useless in this world who lightens the burden of it for anyone else." - this story reminded me of that line from Dickens's Our Mutual Friend. A bit of flash fiction with tons of fairy tale elements, I agree with what everyone else else says: very 'holidays-ey'. Great piece.

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What a sweet fairy tale! Makes the madness of the world a little more bearable, to think that such kindness and mercy happened to someone, sometime, if not here and now.

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I imagine the man’s voice as Tom Waits.

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Wonderful! The tension building from the harmless rabbit up to the man's blade was a nice touch - seeing Nell overcome her hesitancy each time. Always encouraging to see generosity rewarded :)

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This is such a delightful read, especially in the midst of a frosty winter!

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Wonderful morning read. Loved Nell. Hoping this becomes a book. I want to see where Nell ventures to.

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This is such a good story - it feels like a classic parable.

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Thank you for sharing this. It made me so, so happy.

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This is such a lovely story! Thank you for sharing it with me!

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What a beautiful story ❤️

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Beautifully done. Thank you!

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Rereading again. Such a sweet tale.

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Well, I love, love, love this one too. Blessings to you as the cold moves on, and rain and mist returns in their familiar ways. My chickens are happier.

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Simply a wonderful story, perfect for the season.

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Ah, sweet Sally, this was lovely and so timely for our current season. There is hope and prophecy of spring around the corner.

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