Short Fiction - A Digital Holiday Fable
The table is ready for…*checks sheet*…Isabelle? Party of one?
I debated for a bit before reading this - did I want to read a dark holiday story?
But in the end, the quality of your writing and imagination won me over.
This was a brilliantly disturbing short story full of unexpected twists and truths. And as always...that ending!
BRAVA!!!
Wow. Great story. Scary as shit...
George Orwell would be pleased.
Terrifying, in the best way! That last view of YouLog, with the teeth and maggots…. *shudders*… excellently told!
Oh my goodness! 😱
So good!
Love it -- this story is like a treat in my stocking just before Christmas!
*Whispers* Christmas is supposed to be a happy time. This Christmas is dark and strange.
Ooo, creepy in the best holiday fashion!
Nicely done. I guess AI doesn't know or understand the word discretion. But does understand the word lie. I think I'll keep my distance.
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Well, that's going to teach me to restack a line before reading the whole thing, because now I feel bad. 0_0. YIKES.
Nice!
Superb storytelling with this one — the ending was a nice kicker too.
That was clever, and horribly contemporary. 👏
AI is here to help, make our lives better. Fantastic story, Twilight Zone for today.
Oh. Em. Gee.
The table is ready for…*checks sheet*…Isabelle? Party of one?
I debated for a bit before reading this - did I want to read a dark holiday story?
But in the end, the quality of your writing and imagination won me over.
This was a brilliantly disturbing short story full of unexpected twists and truths. And as always...that ending!
BRAVA!!!
Wow. Great story. Scary as shit...
George Orwell would be pleased.
Terrifying, in the best way! That last view of YouLog, with the teeth and maggots…. *shudders*… excellently told!
Oh my goodness! 😱
So good!
Love it -- this story is like a treat in my stocking just before Christmas!
*Whispers* Christmas is supposed to be a happy time. This Christmas is dark and strange.
Ooo, creepy in the best holiday fashion!
Nicely done. I guess AI doesn't know or understand the word discretion. But does understand the word lie. I think I'll keep my distance.
...
Well, that's going to teach me to restack a line before reading the whole thing, because now I feel bad. 0_0. YIKES.
Nice!
Superb storytelling with this one — the ending was a nice kicker too.
That was clever, and horribly contemporary. 👏
AI is here to help, make our lives better. Fantastic story, Twilight Zone for today.
Oh. Em. Gee.